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As winter's darkness encroaches the light,
A black lid upon the coffin of day,
It brings a regret on a chain of steel,
An iron anchor that weighs one down.
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Today I had some trouble wading through your poem. It's overall obvious what your message is, though I found a hitch*** (for me) in severalo places.
encroach (intransitive verb) : '1: to enter by gradual steps or by stealth into the possessions or rights of another 2: to advance beyond the usual or proper limits' Hmm?
Write comment. Such a nice poem, Della P. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
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7/29/2025 2:27:56 AM # 1.0.0
HITCH: (noun; one definition) 'a usually unforeseen difficulty or obstacle' I'm guessing, Della, that Springtime is nicer for you than Wintertime is. bri : )