Monday, May 14, 2012

Hope Comments

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I crouch behind a bush
my heart is racing fast
I can't get rid of the memories
I can't run away from the past
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Elisia Diaz
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Sina Farajzadeh 28 July 2012

Hi. I could find different themes in your poem, like searching for freedom, pain and the final one is hope. I just didn't get the reason for pain. I'd be glad to see your comments on my poems. Thanks

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