Hope
Sigh not for there is hope
Doubt not because it is there
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I very much liked the phrase 'Sing tunes for the far / And dance for the near'. Like the other poems I haqve read so far, this one is very well structured.
i find my poems are either image heavy or down to earth like this one, your writing is powerful
There's a few minor things that need to be fixed aside from that this poem has a complete lack of creative imagery, which is something I struggle with myself but always advise others to include
beautiful! you're writing's hooked me and i'm off to read another...
Sigh not for there is hope Doubt not because it is there Just seek it