Friday, August 18, 2006

Hope Comments

Rating: 4.0

None is waiting here to listen to my void sighs
Carrying no shadow of dismay
But, reminding the world around me
About the darkness engulfing my sole soul
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Rajeswari A V
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Nandan Kara 20 May 2009

The feelings of loneliness are expressed very nicely here. Also the usage of simple words has made it much more beautiful.

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Raveendran . 10 May 2007

the poet who wrote about the unripe pumpkin might have been...

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Hope and despair alternting; eventually hope manages to stand out... for the better. very nice write.

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Kee Thampi 25 August 2006

Hope became a futile word A worthless exercise of the very mind Giving not even a glimpse of delight a mirror of errors of this Big World

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