Are you still there in the shadows
Beyond edge of heaven
Waiting for the bells
Sigh of god
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Beautiful write! Where there's hope there is live. Enjoyed reading it.
Are you still there? I see you the last dream Fog of black arcane sages One last kiss Are you still there? Are you still there? A beautiful poem on hope, hope that exists till the last beath!
Moving write, very alive..Maybe I could hear sound of hearts cracking, with each moment of silence.
Amir, you have without doubt touched the little child in of me...
Amir Forougi ypu have without doubt touched the little child in of me...
Hope should not have more questions, afraid it turn doubt...Not wrong to have hope and but high hopes make sure dont make you down if you cant tie with your reality ropes..Amir, Dont be afraid of the future dont you ever...let your hope be part of you my friend, let it be...Because when you used to live in the dark and no hope inside, will going nowhere, static and sad never ending...time to move on, time to get all freedom..dream well Amir, dont ignore it and let it have some hope may you will find a way to back home :) ..You really talented, but now you stop writing...WHY? keep new piece coming :) Go on for new emotion, bright for sure..Have a great future my friend Amir_Unwritten Soul
yet again a brilliant write. and the flow it's also very much obvious and much like a song. i like the rhymes too. well depicted! !
The shadows and dust, will be the guidance of our next life, when this life is doomed.Good job Amir!
It told me to tell you............ yes, its here when you wake in the morn....... proof
Yes, a hope is still there. Keep searching in the shadows beyond edge of heaven. Wonderful poem, Amir. Touched my heart. Keep sharing. Best Wishes Naseer
ur search for ur soul is intense...lovely write..may god bless u with everything u desire for...touched to read ur biography...10+
Great poem, Amir. 'Are you still there'...Very nice! Also, congrats on having this poem chosen as 'poem of the day'. Well-deserved. Best wishes!