Thursday, June 4, 2009

*hope* Comments

Rating: 3.0

I feel shut off, locked in, separated
(dark alone perilous) .
The woods call with soft green tones,
the sky yearns above,
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David Taylor
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MARCI MADE 21 August 2009

As long as there is hope there is reason to go on... Hope speaks but it's often a 'whisper', so, we must listen or be drown out by the longings that must remain dreams. Excellent David. :)) .

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Ian Bowen 08 June 2009

David, well written piece of work.10/10 Ian

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Alison Cassidy 05 June 2009

Another gem from your metaphysical pen. Even when the black dog lurks in the corner, the soul is attracted to the light. Namaste. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Irene Umulisa 05 June 2009

wow...this is great...then i ask myself do i actually write poetry? this speaks to me especially today when i am feeling blue...hope...there is hope...

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