Friday, April 24, 2009

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Rating: 4.8

get up from bed
use the restroom
go downstairs for breakfast
run to get the phone
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Sabrina ,
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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

Interesting write write Sabrina keep writing your poems and express your self 10 points

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Afzal Shauq 27 May 2009

love your peace willing thoughts as i am known peace wisher poet with 6 books..like this poem...10/10

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Naidz Ladia 24 April 2009

this poem is expressed nicely..sweetheart, if this poem is happening in real life, hope the subject carries this situation..life is still beautiful even if everything is not complete..nice to have outlet to ease the pain and to release burden inside..cheers..the subject is not alone in this world...sweetheart, remember, we love you.. naizz

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