Thursday, May 13, 2010

Hope Comments

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Lift me up
Pick me apart
Take pieces of me into the sky
Defying gravity just for a second
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Lisa Webster
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Brandon Owens 13 May 2010

Nice comparison, I like the way the poem moves, the repeated In...and out... they make you feel like you're almost floating in the air with hope...and then heaven releases it's fury and sends you crashing to the ground in a turbulent change of pace...maybe not so drastic, but still I like it.

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