Sunday, November 2, 2008

Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hope!
Oh!
A child! little red cherry cheeks cheering!
Hopping liitle feet! ....and mother's bosom,
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Rajesh Kumar Vaid
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Caroline Weeks 14 December 2008

Skillfully penned and well-composed...great work! Caroline

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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2008

Yep I can see in the wag of the tail of the wet dog and the beggars bowl that Hope never despairs, but life repairs. nicely penned ++++10 regards anjali

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Lovely, lovely imagery. My mind is coloured with your poem. It was a joy to read! Karin Anderson

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Riquetta Elliott 22 November 2008

Well painted image Mr. Vaid

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Kesav Easwaran 22 November 2008

good 'colorful hope'...painted neat and beautiful...10

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Tai Chi Italy 20 November 2008

I like this forage into this uniquely human condition of 'hope' Rajesh, it is the simply natural things and ways of living life that the 'hope' shines through, we just have to look and see that there is hope and there will always be signs to guide us from the darkness that society seems determined to shroud us in. Thank you for guiding me in this direction....Smiling at you, always with hope, Tai

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Ravi Sathasivam 13 November 2008

Welcome to poem hunter. This poem is very well composed. Excellent topic. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing with me.

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Andrew Blakemore 12 November 2008

Wonderful use of imagery bringing colour to ones thoughts. Best wishes, Andrew

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Dr.subhendu Kar 11 November 2008

Hope never despairs, but life finally repairs! .............. life seems to fledge by the hope soul respires by the rhythm of passion..............wonderful exposition of soul when swells by the hope, the driving force that leads forward by the mortal journey, yet a glow of light even in deep darkness, wrought ingenious by the imagery,10+, thanksfor sharing

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Dr Kamran Haider 11 November 2008

I must say this is a great poem... I had to read it more than couple of times which I usually don't do honestly... Beuatiful selection of naive and harsh relaities of life perfectly blended with the vivid imagery and flowing beautifully from the very first word to the end... Well crafted and great thought... all put together in this wonderful amazing piece by Dr. Rajesh Kumar Vaid... 'Hope never despairs, but life finally repairs! ' What a vision of life and it surely provokes our thoughts... Hats off... Regards, Kamran

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 November 2008

Hope is all we have, following our dreams.. Andrew 10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 November 2008

You 've brought us to the journey of the untold..........but profoundly capturing the glows and shimmering of the 'Majestic'. Well written piece Kumar!

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Colin Jeffery 08 November 2008

A good poem. Keep following your star

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Seema Chowdhury 07 November 2008

wel come to poem hunter. very nicely composed poem that shows your insight. a very well chosen topic and selection of words are good. take care and keep on composing.

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

wow..........this is great poetry sir...........well done!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 02 November 2008

'hope never despairs.......repairs.' nice words........good message through poetic beauty.....my 10 please

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