Hope Comments

quite astounding piece you have here.

I also like the format you chose for this poem. It reads with a very lyrical rhythm. The rhyming works at very nicely and your have some inner rhymes wich add to the flavor of the poem and are not overly evident. A pleasant picture and memory to end the poem. Well done.

I'm keeping this one David... the simplicity and innocence that comes across in the final stanza is resounds. The flow, the phrasing, the images...I love it all. Heading straight[ back to the top to re read. jxx

The poem is composed in a wonderful manner, the question form involves one at once in the depth of the self-analyzing labyrinth, marked by fundamental verbs: to feel, to dream, to want, to pursue... The rhythm is perfect. I like the second and the last stanza very much, 'the world of passion where seamless seams...'etc. Hopefully this 'Hope' will get in the Top 500! BR, one

To be as a child in the rain, revelling in the now! Wonderful poem David

wow, very talented for 23 year old (your previous comment) well done- i really enjoyed it

I was thinking along these lines just yesterday, brilliant poem said so well Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X

Always! I loved this.

alimnetation for the soul in the form of self reflection. good write

ALWAYS & forever - the inner child remains & fairies still exist (& magic mushrooms too - lol) .... awesome poem 10 :)

I more then liked this poem, you penned the feelings of many. Every word rang true.So glad I picked this to read first. Thanks for sharing.

stand on airwaves And think of things That you should not say beautful lines 10+

a wonderful verses..an inspiring piece, , , great write... Ency Bearis

wow.....David......you ought to be proud of this.....it is great! !

Yes I do, too frequently but like the title dictates...Hope is always out there. Drifting upon our minds imagination, is a poets store of inspiration, and we just have to dip our toes. Grinning at you, Tai

We can but live in hope David, another quality poem from you, well done, 10 Lynda xx