Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Hope Comments

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hope is a fickle thing
sets you up and kills your dreams
gets inside and rots your core
you have only a little yet you want more
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Micheal Mixon
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you never knew they would make you pay, , , , , beautifully written. they will make u to pay sometimes. exactly is the happening....... well done good write.....10 read mine hope against hope.. u willfine it interestinga nd confriming ur views too

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

The negative side of the hope is described well. Interesting poem,10+

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Maddy Macleod 27 May 2009

awesome poem. rhyme is a difficult thing to use and keep the rhyme from taking control of the poem. really good job.

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