Alone we walked and in pain
As blade or thorn shall twist
Or loud the silence talked, refrained
And echoes in the mist
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And echoes in the mist Born as angels sing, a light Once on earth before remains Peace His Love brings to night As each new life is more, Reading your poem brings into my mind wonderful images and lot of peace. thank you. tony
IN BETWEEN PAIN AND JOY we walk ever with broadness of perception. An excellent poem is well penned.10
His birth to shine as angels sing As the universe sang the Birth Long ago or this night brings.. thank u for writing this poem on the Birth of the Lord.. thank u. thank u. tony Each babe the hope of earth ..
Delightful poem to read. I enjoyed it. Loved the rhyme scheme in this poem.10 Nudershada
Concluding lines are xlent. As the universe sang the Birth Long ago or this night brings Each babe the hope of earth As thorn or joy rebounds His love on earth resounds. Thanx for share. Regards.
In the misty night, when the world shivered in chill and despondency, angels sang of peace and joy and the world rejoiced over the birth of Light! The song of peace and hope those angels sang rebounds leaving beautiful echoes! A lovely write!
Your meter and rhyme are perfect here, not intrusive but so musical. Your theme touches the soul. Raynette
Hope - The essence of life itself! Excellent composition.
Or loud the silence talked, refrained And echoes in the mist Born as angels sing, a light Once on earth before remains Peace His Love brings to night As each new life is more, proclaims His birth to shine as angels sing As the universe sang the Birth These line are wonderful. I liked the poem very much.
Love and peace become more powerful words in line of poem. Beautiful.
nice silent night-holy night all is calm-all is bright reminds me of that hymn +10 regards anjali (Please do read and comment on my poems)
This is a wonderful poem. It has the magic and harmony that cannot be found everywhere. Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of work
On your poem Hope. You have pictured well about Hope. You may read mine 'hope ever alive. Also please read Helen of Troy as good as Cleopatra. Also 'A woman fortyplus aspires'. Thank you for your view on Cleopatra.
Hope is the seed that will give birth to a new world that we can all enjoy united in belief10 Chris
this is beautifully wonderful poem Bravo!