Saturday, September 6, 2008

Hope Comments

Rating: 4.7

Alone we walked and in pain
As blade or thorn shall twist
Or loud the silence talked, refrained
And echoes in the mist
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 September 2022

this is beautifully wonderful poem Bravo!

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 April 2020

And echoes in the mist Born as angels sing, a light Once on earth before remains Peace His Love brings to night As each new life is more, Reading your poem brings into my mind wonderful images and lot of peace. thank you. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2019

IN BETWEEN PAIN AND JOY we walk ever with broadness of perception. An excellent poem is well penned.10

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2018

His birth to shine as angels sing As the universe sang the Birth Long ago or this night brings.. thank u for writing this poem on the Birth of the Lord.. thank u. thank u. tony Each babe the hope of earth ..

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Nudershada Cabanes 11 May 2018

Delightful poem to read. I enjoyed it. Loved the rhyme scheme in this poem.10 Nudershada

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Ramesh Rai 14 September 2014

Concluding lines are xlent. As the universe sang the Birth Long ago or this night brings Each babe the hope of earth As thorn or joy rebounds His love on earth resounds. Thanx for share. Regards.

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Valsa George 01 September 2014

In the misty night, when the world shivered in chill and despondency, angels sang of peace and joy and the world rejoiced over the birth of Light! The song of peace and hope those angels sang rebounds leaving beautiful echoes! A lovely write!

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Csdb Kind 27 May 2009

i like your style. thank you. do you have the time?

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Raynette Eitel 17 May 2009

Your meter and rhyme are perfect here, not intrusive but so musical. Your theme touches the soul. Raynette

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James B. Earley 02 February 2009

Hope - The essence of life itself! Excellent composition.

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Aiswarya. T.anish 09 October 2008

Or loud the silence talked, refrained And echoes in the mist Born as angels sing, a light Once on earth before remains Peace His Love brings to night As each new life is more, proclaims His birth to shine as angels sing As the universe sang the Birth These line are wonderful. I liked the poem very much.

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Qendresa Ulaj 17 September 2008

i really like this one...

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Prasetya Utama 15 September 2008

Love and peace become more powerful words in line of poem. Beautiful.

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Stephanie Fiddy 15 September 2008

Beautiful poem! Very nice :) I like alot!

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Chitra - 15 September 2008

a great descriptive write, profound in theme

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Anjali Sinha 14 September 2008

nice silent night-holy night all is calm-all is bright reminds me of that hymn +10 regards anjali (Please do read and comment on my poems)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 September 2008

A very nice poem,10 for it.

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Elle B 10 September 2008

This is a wonderful poem. It has the magic and harmony that cannot be found everywhere. Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of work

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 08 September 2008

On your poem Hope. You have pictured well about Hope. You may read mine 'hope ever alive. Also please read Helen of Troy as good as Cleopatra. Also 'A woman fortyplus aspires'. Thank you for your view on Cleopatra.

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Kris Smith 06 September 2008

Hope is the seed that will give birth to a new world that we can all enjoy united in belief10 Chris

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