Friday, May 5, 2006

Hope Comments

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What is hope, ask a bee in cold winter days,
she hangs around the pruned rose bushes,
with the hope that someday the spring will come,
and the flowers will bloom again in the garden.
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Rachel Z. 07 August 2008

I adore this! I shared this poem with my English class a few years ago when we all had to bring in a poem by any author we chose. It inspired me to start writing more poems of my own, and now I was reading through some of mine and I saw that you had commented on one! The website is such an amazing resource, and it's astounding to see how over a year and a half ago I sat admiring one of your poems, with no idea that someday you'd give me feedback on one of mine! Thank you sharing this, and your thoughts!

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Allenika ... 19 May 2006

wow you really described what hope is. thts really good. keep it up, jay

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

Bihar, India
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