Saturday, September 23, 2023

Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a world that feels dim, where shadows reside,
A journey through valleys, with nowhere to hide.
The weight of the years, like stones in my chest,
As I grapple and wrestle with life's toughest test.
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John Burns
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Sandra Feldman 14 October 2023

That does highly impress and will remain as very best. An all Star poem!

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John Burns 18 October 2023

Thank you

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Sandra Feldman 14 October 2023

A most wonderful poem! Great cuality of poetry and deepest feelings Very impressed! Ecellent poetic achievement

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D.N. Rebb 14 October 2023

WOW, WOW, WOW. Thanks to Jayne for tagging this one as her favorite, otherwise I would have missed it. Such a powerful poem.

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John Burns 18 October 2023

Thank you : )

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Jayne Louise Davies 13 October 2023

Absolutely love this! Thank you for sharing. Top marks*****

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Kingsley Egbukole 23 September 2023

No matter how hard the road and steep the climb, the love of our cherished family keeps us going. Beautiful poem

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John Burns 28 September 2023

Thank you. It certainly makes the path easier to walk.

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