Monday, June 26, 2006

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My humdrum lassie in no-fly zone
Who has no-frills and the innocent girl lives in a Hamlet.
She knows the nipper-bee cannot wait such a long time.
Whenever her hubris parents hear my hum
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nimal dunuhinga
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Joseph Daly 26 June 2006

Nimal, this is great and very humourous. I love the way you have brought the imagery to play and I can almost see you grinning to yourself. Wonderful poem my friend. It made my day.

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Sandra Fowler 26 June 2006

Interesting symbolism in this one.It would seem that this country girl needs protection even from herself. Very inventive thinking, Nimal. Sandra

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