Hop Scotch Comments

A wonderful short poem with long memories. Loved it. Also appreciate the comment of poet Akhtar Jawad- very nicely said!

To me it seems as a memory of an act of childhood, an innocent lovely game that could not be forgotten, due to some very special reason, may be due to a love affair initiated in those games or because the game is now played by one's children. Such likings have a deep root.

this is your first post on 8/8 /2010 here along with your other four poems, i am glad to comment first..on a poem which is too romantic and soft..