Sunday, November 6, 2011

Hop! Hop! Hop! Love Pops Up In My Heart! : Part-2 Comments

Rating: 4.8

I'll belong to you till the very fag end in every-way,
You will stay as my sweet heart and a chocolate, till I die.
My life is so ultimate, even since you are my soul mate,
So trust me with your heart, oh, my checkmate!
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Harindhar Reddy
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Jacqui Broad 07 November 2011

I saw the contrast of love. If you're in-love, your heart beats faster, you're on cloud 9. To deny the glory of love simply leaves one feeling miserable. Part 1, for me, was a bit playful, but part 2! This is seriously written with an undertone of sadness. It must be love you're feeling...

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for a nice comment on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Romeo Della Valle 06 November 2011

Deep, heart touching and romantic write that clearly gives you away! You are a great Poet with a warm heart and mind! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more such talented and creative works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City....

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Harindhar Reddy 21 May 2020

Thank you for your heart-touching comment on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Crimson Love 06 November 2011

The Onomatopoeia used in this poem is fantastic, 'Hop! Hop! Hop! Love pops up in my heart! ' Truly splendid!

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