Friday, March 28, 2014

Honourable People Comments

Rating: 4.5

Like a toddler woes
in excess of stomach pain

like lover's blood palpitates
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Hira Ahsan
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Bill Cantrell 10 May 2014

Great poem! I just love the ending.

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Shahzia Batool 29 March 2014

Good poem in an intriguing style...just edit (flower) as i said, trust the readers!

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