Guided by the moon
He took her to a dark place
Cloaked with wildflowers
Forced her to yield to his lust
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A beautiful Tanka! You are a wonderful poetess. Enjoy poetry and enjoy life. Merry Christmas to you.
Hauntingly heart breaking but yet reborn under a sky so new! .. Beyond #S! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++
This darkly lurid metaphor poem makes a very fascinating Tanka, powerfully articulated, which I so admired
A very impressive Tanka.5 Stars full. I have enjoyed very much!
Destroying her honor by his dishonor. A dark subject, but a great, five-star poem!
A n important poem about the devilish mentality of man only.My gratitudes to u Mam for this brave poem.