Monday, June 18, 2018

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Rating: 5.0

In between you and me there is a thick and high wall
We cannot break this wall, we shall only break our bones,
It's too high and I found its roots are too deep
This wall is made of unbreakable very hard stones.
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Khalid Saifullah 18 June 2018

Such a great poem inviting a neighbor to the glories of love.

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Kelly Kurt 18 June 2018

You have once again confirmed yourself as this sites foremost love poet! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2018

Love is a magic it's a gift of God can do anything Everything in this world is mortal but Love is immortal, .....so true and so touching. A beautiful poem on love nicely executed.10

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Salini Nair 18 June 2018

Love is a magic it's a gift of God can do anything Everything in this world is mortal but Love is immortal.nice poem akhtarji

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 June 2018

Such a lovely poem. Love knows no boundary and can travel fast and wide. Can even jump the wall with ease. Enjoyed. Thanks.

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