Sunday, July 24, 2005

Honeymoon Sonnet Comments

Rating: 2.0

In silken sheets of her Italian bed
we consummated after we were wed
the union that each soul is lusting for
woke in the morn to a most fright'ning roar
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert, please stop with the childish couplets. They really are irritating. Linda may think this is lighthearted but its more lightheaded than anything. P-Snob

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Jerry Hughes 25 July 2005

good one Herbert. Truthfully, what were you smoking at the time? Lots of fun.

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Linda Preston 25 July 2005

I enjoyed this, Herbert - very light hearted and well done. You really should publish these epics.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 24 July 2005

LOL...Herbert. This Lion seems to have enjoyed this 'honeymoon' as well. WITH the mom...you have quite an imagination. LSP

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