Saturday, September 12, 2009

Honeyed Lips Comments

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Light falls
Across her sweet face
Smiling with pleasure at her thoughts
Complete love
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Fiona Davidson
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Carl Harris 13 September 2009

This is a very beautiful and most impressive triple Cameo poem, Fi, and your lovely words are deeply touching in this wonderful poem. Carl.

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Sue Sie 12 September 2009

A great comparison made here....and a lovely triple Cameo...written with a softness that is felt through the reading. Sue x

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Fay Slimm 12 September 2009

This is beautiful Fi. - - a warm and tender love poem - - and the title is just right too......10 + + + Fay

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