Sunday, May 7, 2017

Honeybunch Comments

Rating: 4.2

He works hard to get attention
Walks behind but never mention
Your presence make him a poet
Nervous but you will never know it
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Rini Shibu
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Aqua Flower 19 August 2018

A very romantic piece filled with passion!

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Robert Murray Smith 11 May 2018

A poem that is romantically inclined.+++10

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Lamar Cole 19 June 2017

Very romantic poem filled with passion.

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Rini Shibu 19 June 2017

Thanks to a romantic poet

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Siddartha Montik 06 June 2017

Very Sensual..! Loved it! and again wonderfully subtle expressions! ! sweet to read! a definite 10++! !

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Rini Shibu 06 June 2017

Thanks Siddhartha....

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 May 2017

Hi Rini, Nice poem. A tinge of sensuousness: He will build all your dream Give you pleasure till you scream Takes you to a different world Move with you in rhythmic swirl Beautiful work. A 10+++

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Rini Shibu 27 May 2017

Thank you... :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 May 2017

To get attention! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 18 May 2017

True love try to get attention

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 May 2017

A different shade of love Jerry. Thanks

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Rini Shibu 18 May 2017

Thank u jazib

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