Tuesday, March 25, 2008

Honey-Mouthed Comments

Rating: 3.4

Fake verbal crystal sugar i was fed
before i knew of you; your honey words
like golden liquid fill my head;
now i am starving for this flavoured blend;
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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 June 2009

Lovely and interesting

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Rema Prasanna 05 July 2008

This is so beautiful a write full of honey even though lost a bit.. heart can carry it a long way.. happy day ahead onelia.. I liked this 10 and more. Rema

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Original Unknown Girl 02 July 2008

After my little bee one I had to come back to this. It's those ones with the honey mouths that can get us into so much trouble - No? Love this and all it stands for! HG: -) xx

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Coach Roth 27 June 2008

Not just the girls T...I think we all can relate to it...or maybe that's just my feminine side showing...but what a beautiful arrangement of words evoking a drip of honey smoozing down from the spoon...Coach

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R H 19 May 2008

Delicious words here Onelia - a poem that oozes those feelings of love and melts them together to form this fluid write. justine

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There cannot be a single girl on this site who cannot relate to this... nor one who would not wish that she might have written it so engagingly. t x

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David Desantis 01 May 2008

you really have an ability to bring images to life. Somehow I was picturing bees and love at the same time..haha excellent Onelia as always.

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Original Unknown Girl 01 May 2008

Some people just have a way with words Onelia! I can vouch for that.... wonderful runny honey offering! ! HG: -) xx

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Donall Dempsey 07 April 2008

Oh you silver tongue devil...ya got me...ya got me! I am dying with the beauty of your words. Kill me some me! love Donall Donall

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Roger Cornish 06 April 2008

As F says below.... Your GOOD! Excellent poetry... Rx

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Flora Gillingham 26 March 2008

Drowsily drunk on your honeyed words, I must stagger back to the hive. F

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Dr.subhendu Kar 25 March 2008

beauty when reveled by the grace love seems to glow by the blaze..................well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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