Honey Melon Comments

Sounds like a life tainted by alcoholism; I detect sorrow and detachment from living. Intriguing composition, though I feel awfully saddened by it.

I really like this its short but its well thoughtful and has great choice of words very dynamic.

A good write! Well done!

From the fig leaf to a tie to hide our indecency, we are born naked to the world and our spirit will return naked to our maker. Not sure if this was your meaning but I liked the last two lines. Thought provoking poem. Good write.