Wednesday, September 10, 2008

Honey, I’m Home! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its quiet now, after a long day at work
Phones finally hushed
Lights domino out
Black roads snake away
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Anita Atina
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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 September 2008

Amazing. Beautiful composition with very nice imagery. Love it.10 for it.

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Al Ramos 17 September 2008

The old cliche, home is where the heart is, and the heart keeps you going through our daily tasks, mundanes as they may be.

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Lynda Robson 11 September 2008

A beautifully crafted poem Anita, great imagery and atmosphere, well done, 10 Lynda xx

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