Sunday, October 4, 2015

Honey Bee Comments

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Honey Bee


Honey bee, honey bee
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shakil ahmed
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Nosheen Irfan 17 June 2016

A thoughtful write. You have wonderful observation that you have put into beautiful words. Well-penned.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 November 2015

very nice...honey we all love it...naturally we have to pay for the honey... the bees doing labour and dies early... we live longer thereafter...even the Queen bee dies 4 years thereafter... only honey bees have shorter lives of four months know it.... humans have a long way to go... and know how a small honey bee... converts pollen to honey... for you and me.... sweet is honey.... like a lovely kiss we get from a miss...for free...you do it daily... you know it... so for a jar pay for the small sweetest kiss off Honey you get for free... ain't it love you do again and again kiss kiss and kiss till blushes your loveliest miss... How was the Honeys kiss..latest!

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Wes Vogler 12 November 2015

Ho, Shakil.. good rhythmic humorous outlook thankyou

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Thanks a lot for comments onsmile and happy. Your poem honey bee was simply superb, I enjoyed calling honey bee honeybee, it was like really talking to the bees sir, pls refer to my poems on bees also and give me your comments. Thank you again.172341111

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 18 October 2015

The simplicity of words on the honey bees in this poem that enjoyed much.

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Loke Kok Yee 17 October 2015

Lovely rhythm and flow. enjoyed reading. Thanks

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Vishal Sharma 17 October 2015

nicely written poetry over bee love the images you used

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M Asim Nehal 14 October 2015

Nice rhythmic poem on Honey bee, I liked the poem. Good write.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2015

Take honey for the sake of your health. Nice work. Thaks for sharing.

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Rahman Henry 14 October 2015

Beautiful, rhydom... and a lovely poem.

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Sumit Ganguly 12 October 2015

A good informative poem. Thanks for sharing. Sumit Ganguly.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 05 October 2015

Honey bee, honey bee By your laborious feat of work In the lives of human being You have put your decent mark. Verily, the working of honey bee is a fine example of hard work, planned work and devotion.

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Kelly Kurt 05 October 2015

A lovely, nicely written poem, Shakil. Thanks

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