Saturday, September 30, 2006

Honesty Comments

Rating: 5.0

You put on a natural show
yet l do believe you don't know.
I am well aware that you show,
but my own not knowing displayes its hues.
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Molly Forest
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Marvin Brato 11 October 2006

Very expressive at your young age, good poem miss Molly. You deserved another 10.

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