Thursday, December 25, 2014

~honestly~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is something sinister
Within this system feel it stir
Around you, you're unwelcome
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Galina Italyanskaya 06 February 2015

I won't even comment this! just admire your skill and... well, no more words)

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 January 2015

This is a great triplet! There is a subtle sadness in its tone; especially in the fourth stanza. A poem about life, about self-discovery, a poem of contrasts: life-death, truth-lie. I was pondering at the line -The luxury, in a losing game - very well thought, and very well written. Great!

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