Homo Suburbiensis Comments

Yes. Good story. The lord approves

Nicely put together with deep insight.

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Not much but as much as any man can offer - time, pain, love, hate, age, ware, death, laughter, fever. beautiful thoughts. tony

We have come a long way in our fast changing lifestyle, still with our emotions and longings we are the child of Nature. Great poem to read. Congratulations.

A true suburban poem, let me cite this line of the poem: He stands there, lost in a green confusion, smelling the smoke of somebody's rubbish............terrible that must be, but that's like that for most suburbans, to daily work. Con gratulations with this accolade.

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I like how it's about gardening and doesn't have any avengers in it

impressive writings /// wonderfully penned the last couplet Not much but as much as any man can offer - time, pain, love, hate, age, ware, death, laughter, fever. // great

Over the compost-box! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The images in this poem are rich and summon well for me the experience of being in a garden. The last two lines lift it from mere description to much more. in them i don't get ware though; i wonder if it's a typo and should be war. -GK

Written as though looking at a photograph

Such a wonderful poem by Donald Bruce Dawe.......................

This was useful, I liked the audio as well, Siri is hot

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A great poem that lives at home.

The last line should be: - time, pain, love, hate, age, war, death, laughter, fever. ie. Not ware, but war.