Homo Sapiens Comments

A superb poem indeed. Great theme. Thanks for sharing it. You have successfully depicted a newer meaning of life

With best wishes, my Russian friend. ;)

***** Val, my 'long-lost' friend. 'And you must live and strife.' You'll lose a fine rhyme, BUT 'strife', I say, should be 'strive'. I hope you and Kira? are well, or your bodies are resting well. ;) bri

Brian, I'm done with Poem Hunter. If you want and can, write me at the post office in Yahoo or Mail.ru.

Brian, my friend, what happened to you? You're completely lost. You don't show up on Yahoo. Write me something or are you forbidden to write to me? ! It's impossible to write here, it's all advertising. I had to remove the ad blocker. I won't set foot here again. Sorry.

Ha! Val, i have the same suggestion now, as i did in 2019, about this line; 'And you must live and strife.' But on the 'new' PH, there seems to be no way to edit the poem. : ( bri : )

i read again. i kind of like it, Sir! bri ;) gee, my last visit was only 3 months ago!

2 – " And you must live and strife." how about " live and strive" or " live with strife" ? ? i like this quite a bit. to MyPoemList. could the memory of you, Val, ever be driven out of someone's heart? not mine! ! Bri :)

1 – " The binomial name sapiens was coined by Linnaeus,1758. The Latin noun homō (genitive hominis) means " human being" , while the participle sapiēns means " discerning, wise, sensible" . " [ i Googled this ]

i like love and i love, but to read Jazib's poem is not a must (do) . bri edwards :)

Wow! Great poetry, Valentin savin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.