Thursday, August 13, 2009

Homeward Bound Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am a nomad coming home,
A wanderer with no place lest to roam.
I am a warrior homeward bound,
An eagle coming down.
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Steven SRS
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Kasey Graham 25 June 2010

This feels a great deal like a piece written on the front of one's shield, battle-scarred and worn. Like the beginning of a hymn of battle. Well written.

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Cheryl Caron 28 August 2009

i like the idea of the nomad coming home.....nice write....

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Patti Masterman 13 August 2009

This poem fits so snuggly with the other warrior-knight-quest themes. I think you are an old reincarnated Knight and Ninja. Love that word, nomad. It always eludes me when I am searching for the needed word. LOL.

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Steven SRS

Steven SRS

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