Homeless man I watched you
line a deserted doorway,
your Maytag boxes cardboard monuments
in Fed Ex labels
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Ah, A subject I too Have set about to address in my - We the Unencumbered - a must read. Adeline
Double wow. I thought you captured the essence of being a homeless man. It held my attention to the very last line. I love the way you tell a story in your work....
Wow. This is really good! You've chosen to address something that is too often ignored in life today, and you do so with a passion. Can i ask, was this inspired by a real encounter, or just a passing thought? Love your stuff! Steve
THANK U! I loved it 21 SENT IT WAS THE YY BST OOO