Saturday, May 2, 2015

Homeless? /B.O.! ….. [homeless? ; Mcdonalds; True Story] Comments

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I walked to McDonalds to get a cone;
I was by myself. Yes, it’s true. I was alone.
As I walked through a side parking lot …..
I heard a guy yelling, and he was HOT!
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Bri Edwards
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Beach Girl 19 May 2015

That's really sad Bri. I just don't know what to think. I wonder if McDonalds ha some policy concerning disallowing people inside who emit horrible odors? I can see how it would discourage customers if that were so. But at the same time, it's a terrible shame that a human being was treated in such a way.

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Savita Tyagi 12 May 2015

Very compassionate poem. it is sad and discriminating that some body can be denied entry because of BO.

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Jak Black 08 May 2015

Enjoyed this poem Bri. Shows your compassionate side. Ha ha. Homeless people are not all necessarily homeless by choice. They're more to be pitied than laughed at. Such a shame that in this day and age, in the wealthiest countries in the world, some people feel they are totally abandoned and excluded. For some to have much more than they actually need others have to go without the basic neccessities

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