Saturday, June 30, 2018

Homeless Comments

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No one knows your glory
No one knows your shame
No one's heard your story
And no one knows your name
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Vincent LeVine
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 July 2018

No one knows your troubles No one feels your pains No one feels your heartbeat......your heartbeats for the poor....... such sublime thoughts you have dear poet. God bless u for writing this poem for the sake of the poor. tony

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Melanie Emiko 10 July 2018

No one knows your shame - powerfu!

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Glen Kappy 07 July 2018

The rhymes in this one seem to flow naturally, Vincent, with the sense and logic intact. This one, I think, could be made into a song. -GK

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Vincent 08 July 2018

Great insight Glen! It has been made into a song by a close friend.

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Ruta Mohapatra 07 July 2018

A powerful poem describing the plight of the homeless! Thanks for sharing!

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Vincent 08 July 2018

Thanks Ruta!

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Vincent LeVine

Vincent LeVine

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