Homeless Comments

very nyc.....

Well done, Your lines made me cry. The world situation now let anybody cry for our children injured. Thank you.

a sad commentary on the fate of so many children world wide...it is an increasingly common state of affairs with all manner of refuges...some going east some west...knowing not why the situation has unfolded as it has sad poignant and well written liked

Thaank you so much Abduhoo, , , , i am sorry for your tears but this is what happening in reality, i wish it will change one day

what a poem...i cant control my self...my eyes couldnt stop tears to flow after read your poem...really heat touhing poem....tyhanks for sharing.

Thank you both Dr. Tony and mohamed skati for reading, i am glad you like the topic and u agree on what is touching, cruel and hard that is homelesness ^^

my dear poetess. very sad and poetic description of poverty, suffering, homelessness, in this cruel world. you have great power in you to express your insights. this is a very touching poem. it touched the emotional string in my heart......... thank you dear poetess

Generally speaking, great poetess, it's a pretty poem with a pretty subject which is homelessness. Homelessness is something cruel and hard. Our world is cruel enough simply because there are a lot of homeless people here and there as a result of on-going wars or any disasters without any efforts to fix these problems.A good luck.

Thank you mr mohammed very clever opinion

Thank you so much for your opinion... appreciated

A very impressive poem describing a child who has lost his home and his father, charity may rebuilt his house but how he will get his father back. The question arises how his house was destroyed and his father was dead. It seems that the family is a war affected and the child was constrained to pay the libel of war. A touching poem, the poetess has very effectively narrated the tragedy.