Homeless Comments

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

You are going to turn into a fine person, it is not bad to be homeless, now you can start to build own home.Search deep inside try find what would you like. The most important and most hard step already done, a search for love and peace that is the most right path to follow. Hope! that is what gives you wings, am glad you didn't loose it! Fly sweet Kayla, spread your wings and do whatever you wish but try to keep your hope for a better world filled with with love and peace. That is what we all of us wish for. Keep writing, I loved your poem, thank you for share,10 By the way all the best wishes for a week before birthday, same mine, just got a bigger bag for the stones to add..