Thursday, August 20, 2009

Homeless Comments

Rating: 5.0

There were song birds sweetly singing
and fawns beside a brook
all the while a mandolin elf
danced atop a book
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George Murdock
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Lynn Glover 13 February 2010

Great poem, great rhythem and structure. You make being homeless sound like something great. Thanks for the sterling poetic values of this poem, Your friend Lynn

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Nimal Dunuhinga 12 October 2009

Hey! George my dear friend I see a poetic feast beside a brook in life...........and the wine tastes Irish!

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Patrick McFarland 26 August 2009

Hi George. This is really terrific. A very enjoyable read. It's going in my favorites.

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Patti Masterman 26 August 2009

This is so poetic and the rhyme and rhythm suited it perfectly. This is perfection in words.

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