Shirt is torn, hole in shoe
tin can by my side with a coin or two
people look but they don't care
nothing can match the pain im in
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mmmm that's so real amazing delineating of a truth we see every day not caring for the suffering of these homeless thank u for such gr8 lines :)
Superb poem concerning a sensitive subject.. You have infused life in the words... they do penetrate within, manipulating my senses. Thanks.