Monday, May 18, 2009

Homeless Comments

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Shirt is torn, hole in shoe
tin can by my side with a coin or two
people look but they don't care
nothing can match the pain im in
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Sharon Wiebe
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Kushal Vaishnani 04 June 2009

Superb poem concerning a sensitive subject.. You have infused life in the words... they do penetrate within, manipulating my senses. Thanks.

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Marigold Flower 18 May 2009

mmmm that's so real amazing delineating of a truth we see every day not caring for the suffering of these homeless thank u for such gr8 lines :)

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