Thursday, February 19, 2009

Homeless Comments

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Sitting here at the sidewalk of life
Deep in my own futility and strife
Funny watching the world pass me by
Would they even stop if I cry?
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Gordon D Wilkinson
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Roseann Shawiak 17 February 2014

Homeless people seem to definitely have a clear picture of reality, as they watch the world revolve around them, keeping it's distance through other people. Have written several poems about being homeless also, if you're interested. RoseAnn

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nomad omnia 18 March 2009

It's very easy to slip this low, and very hard to pull out of it. A great write Gordon.

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Chelsea Moffitt 22 February 2009

How incredibly insightful. The homeless almost have a pure view of what our world has really come to. Beautiful writting. Heart wrenching.

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Gordon D Wilkinson

Gordon D Wilkinson

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