Sunday, February 8, 2009

Homeless Comments

Rating: 5.0

while walking thru the woods one day
a wise homeless man came my way
and as he came closer to me
he asked me so softely.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2009

and as he walked away, a mist covered him from view. there was no one there, that was when i knew. the LORD had came to me that day. just to show me the homeless way..this i show we appriciete and disregard the lord when displaced.. but the one who acts wise when in comfortable position is something very graceful act as God too smiles for graceful act....really wonderful....10 read mine prayer for fiend....go back...i am disgrace

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Christine Kerr 10 April 2009

Well thought out, Louis (Armstrong. The more I read of you the more I see 'A Beautiful World' through your eyes. This one really finds a place in my heart. Thanks for sharing

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Sandra Fowler 09 February 2009

Richly spirfitual in every sense of the world. 10 for your wonderful story poem. Kind regards, Sandra

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Bro, this is quite touching. I see you now, In eyes with 20/20 vision. you are a good soul! God bless

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Jim Norausky 08 February 2009

Very nice poem with a powerful message that is real, not fantasy. Well done. Jim

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