Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Homecoming Comments

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I cleared the snow, tantalizing me
to look beyond the window pane.
The clouds tell a different story today.
A story of reunion, of hope.
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Miraj Raha
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Sanjukta Nag 17 September 2015

Homecoming is one of the exquisite feelings. beautiful use of imagery. thank you.

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David Wood 16 September 2015

Very good start to your poetry career.

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Shankaran Kutty 16 September 2015

Expresses the emotions of nostalgia very well.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2015

Excellent. Thrilling expression with best collocation. Thanks for sharing. ......10

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Liza Sudina 16 September 2015

snow? or you left India?

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Miraj Raha 17 September 2015

haha, well caught that one.But I hope it doesn't hurt to be imaginary.

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