Friday, October 28, 2005

Home & The Butterfly Comments

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I built my life with muddy bricks and a tin sheet for the roof,
My history teacher suggests the name; poverty
But it's weather-beaten knows everybody.
Am I heavy to carry on your soft wings?
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Sandra Fowler 06 October 2007

Butterflies have so little time before they fly away. And yet Tagore tells us that they have time enough. Beautiful poem, Nimal. Always your friend, Sandra

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Melvina Germain 04 January 2007

I love the last line of this poem, (Red ants on the window sill very busy and I heard a butterfly's crying) . Oh the sweet sounds of nature. Excellent poem Nimal--Thankyou--Melvina

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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