Thursday, May 19, 2016

Home, Sweet Home Comments

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Alas! They flew away!
An immigrant they became,
they were born in a cage,
and passing a happy life in it,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Edward Kofi Louis 03 February 2019

Next day i saw the female! ! ! ! Home sweet Home. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 May 2016

Very interestingly drafted and shared this poem is really. sweet home where they were born, I closed the doors of the cage. Every line in this has poetic strength to express. Wonderful.10

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Loke Kok Yee 21 May 2016

Animals caged are no longer able to survive in the wild Too innocent and trusting, much like a dhild thank you sir for this write-10

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Hazel Durham 21 May 2016

A great write, beautifully written Akhtar and a sad story of survival but the young ones live in their cage a symbol of freedom lost!

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