Home Stories (Senryu) Comments

nice home stories -10 anjali

Wow Sandra, i love how you put the artistic touch to moments so many take for granted. Lovely. Thank you for sharing your talent with us :)

You have drawn a warming picture of life at home, after all it is the best place to be.

These are all enchanting Sandra. The cats slinking licking the floor, now that would be a good way not having to clean your floors. How comforting the cookie jar is when it is full. Nothing like home made cookies! And the flowers, it's these beautiful things that make being a parent so worthwhile. Loved them all! 10 Karin Anderson

A lovely picture of your home stories well told, 10 Lynda xx

This again is beautiful indeed.. I loved this lines.. sort of filled with emotions too... with loves shan

very beautiful home stories Sandra. as Carl says you have painted picture of domestic bliss.10 Mamta

These are three very lovely phrased and written senryu poems, Sandra, all of them full with domestic bliss. I liked the one about the cats, since they love to lap up spilt milk! The one about the boy giving his mom flowers was quite lovely. In fact, they all were delightful reads. Carl.

Milk...cookies....flowers.....Lovely home stories of routine life captivated in three simple lines. Very impressive, Sandra......10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

3 nice lines and you get the beautiful picture. Short and sweet. Can smell the cookies with the lovely fragrance of the Roses. Umm! 10+++

all three of them lovely...the second and third exceptional...10

Very nice homely senryus!

it gives me a cozy homely feeling.thanks

Wonderful muusing on home...wonderful sets of wording....excellent Sandra

as always Sandra you have excelled with these pieces...Fi 10+++

wonderful pieces.. ordinary stories converted into an amazing senryu.. lovely

the neighbourhood cat enjoyed feast of cookies too and stayed back.......... lovely write Sandra...read my poems calleds, colors, worth, lunar might and plateau....

WOW! ! ! Awesome collation of home senryu...well done! 10+++