Oh fair land of Arthur, of unsurpassed beauty,
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Hello Lucy, You've described a lovely place. Nice use of rhythm, images. Warmest regards, CJ
That's a really nice poem Lucy, I have holidayed in Cornwall and loved it so much, mostly North Cornwall. Sincerely Ernestine Northover
You really know how to use rhythm. This read beautifully and reminded me, powerfully, of Keats with a few of the phrases. I must say though; i've always been an Arthur was Welsh kinda man myself. And you forgot to add how perversely individual the Cornish have always been!
You have the gift of making us homesick for the beautiful places of your heart.