Home Isn'T Home Anymore Comments

i'm sure this has meaning for you. well-written. the only suggestion is to look at Has turned in to a place. thanks for sharing. i thought, as i read this, that the person was about to be released from a prison or hospital. :) there's no place like home, unfortunately, does not always ring true!

You have successfully described a home overtaken by demons. You've taken the readers with you. While we pray this kind of situation doesn't happen to our worst enemies, we should also guard ourselves against any complacence or any faltering from our side.

Beautiful write.... Lovely home, where all your demons rest.....Enjoyed reading it.