Wednesday, September 27, 2006

Home Is... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Home is...
Hugs and laughter;
But not everything,
Is happily ever after.
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Josephine Adrian
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Sami Amusan 02 January 2008

good poem about home and like how you ended it take a look at some of my poems im 13 year aswell

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Carissa Thiessen 28 March 2007

Home is not always what its cracked up to be, but I love how you put it into words. It sounds like you have a great home to go to!

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Twilight Whispers 22 January 2007

I love this poem, it is very eloquently written and it says what I have always wanted to say about my home! It is somewhere to feel safe and loved, I very much agree with you! =]

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Scarlet Red 27 September 2006

ooowww.. this is such a cutie poem.. the rhythm and rhyme is perfect for me... i like it.. it best describes what home is all about... home, home, home.. the best place in the world.. nice piece josephine =)

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Jimmy Watkinson 27 September 2006

Home sweet home, Home is where the heart is. I do very much like the quaint image portrayed, rather good indeed. Some of have unfortunetly not had this image of home to enjoy, they have had their own to 'endure'. This is a rather nice piece indeed. Well done. jw

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Josephine Adrian

Josephine Adrian

Victoria, BC
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