Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Home Enough Comments

Rating: 4.9

Where my feet will find me.
A corner for my boots to stand.
That's home enough for me.
So long as your shoes lay nearby.
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Edmund Strolis
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Norah Tunney 10 April 2016

I love the shoe image so original and so surprisingly intimate and romantic I enjoyed this poem so much Edmund and the last two lines so true

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Edmund Strolis 10 April 2016

The message was true even if the love was not......................new home, new world, new possibilities.

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Norah Tunney 10 April 2016

We are always enriched in some way whatever the outcome

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Sarah Persson 12 February 2016

You squeeze the dance towards the moment. Thrilled when the music's right for you. This makes love like it should be. Beautiful poem.

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Nosheen Irfan 11 February 2016

Beautiful, beautiful. Love n affection make a home. A compelling composition on life, love and future.

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Savita Tyagi 10 November 2015

Loved the imagery and originality of defining the home. Home is a place for shelter and warmth to be shared with a loved one. Your poem portrayed it wonderfully. Thank you for sharing. Many thanks for your recent comment too. Appreciate it very much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2015

Together they make a loving home. Where tomorrow they will wander....Very amazing composition and imagery is perfect with description shared here. Wisely penned really....10

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Pamela Sinicrope 29 October 2015

The idea of a place to set your boots with someone else's is super romantic in a natural, comfortable, authentic way. What a lucky couple! :)

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Kelly Kurt 28 October 2015

A lovely poem, Edmund. A home is only a place to take off your boots, unless it is shared. Thanks

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Edmund Strolis 28 October 2015

Sometimes it seems that the simplest sentiments are often the most profound.

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