Monday, July 21, 2008

Home Coming... Comments

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Sometimes
in distant foreign lands, when
pangs of loneliness caress me with the forgotten love
and eerie solitude smothers me with gloomy affection
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Bharat Trivedi
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Chitra - 02 August 2008

fine lines these are! very well laid out

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Susan Jarvis 30 July 2008

I adore this poem. The imagery is so utterly vivid it makes me feel that I too have visited your home. 'Sailing with sobbing sentiments in a stone hearted ship' is a magnificent line - sibilance used to sad and sorrowful effect! S :)

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